Close
Close
Comments: Nested

Engineering360: "Transparent Patch to Detect Dangerous Food Threats Developed by Researchers"

04/06/2018 9:51 AM

Read Engineering360 article: Transparent Patch to Detect Dangerous Food Threats Developed by Researchers.

Register to Reply
Interested in this topic? By joining CR4 you can "subscribe" to
this discussion and receive notification when new comments are added.
Commentator

Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: WA
Posts: 80
Good Answers: 3
#1

Re: Transparent Patch to Detect Dangerous Food Threats Developed by Researchers

04/08/2018 12:45 AM

The passive tense will get you every time. What about dangerous food threats developed by non-researchers?

Perhaps a bit more clearly stated as: "Researchers Develop Transparent Patch to Detect Dangerous Food Threats" would eliminate the unintended humor?

__________________
clint.bowman@comcast.net
Register to Reply
Register to Reply

Advertisement