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Inputs needed on article about Joint Strike Fighter

07/03/2008 8:05 AM

Hi, I have written an article about the F-35 Joint Strike Fighter [JSF] program. Could you please take a look at it and offer your inputs, suggestions and criticisms.

I prepared this article by going through information availabe in public domain. I am a Third Year Undergraduate student of Mechanical Engineering. Your input is eagerly awaited.

This article tries to focus solely on the technological aspect of the project and not the political implications.

The article can be read here (hosted on Zoho)

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Re: Inputs needed on article about Joint Strike Fighter

07/03/2008 12:45 PM

Had a quick skim...looks ok.

I would however remove or seriously modify the 'introduction' as it verges on a political statement which is facile...If one considers the modern terrorist threat, an airoplane is pretty irrelevant (IMO).

I'll read the rest more fully later.

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Re: Inputs needed on article about Joint Strike Fighter

07/04/2008 1:31 PM

Hi Del,

Thank you for taking time off to go through my [attempt at writing an] article. As for the introduction, on hindsight I did feel that it did not convey the point I was trying to make. What I was actually trying to say that the menace of terrorism could be effectivley tackeld if many affected countries came together to collaborate their efforts towards this cause.

The fact that such a multinational collaborative effort is possible and very much active is aptly demonstrated by the Joint Strike Fighter program.

Thank you for your input. I shal rephrase my introduction if it gives the reader the impression that JSF is the answer to terrorism, which I too do not believe it is :)

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