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What do you think about business letter?

09/28/2011 10:31 PM

Every day,when you open the mail-box. lots of letter like this:

Dear Sir/Madam,


We are venturing to write to you in hoping that you are interested in sourcing waste oil burner from China. As professional manufacture for alternative product in China, we have been specializing in exporting waste oil burner to 55 countries for 6 years .Especially, quality product plus competitive price wins us good sales.

Various fuels are applicable for our burner, e.g. waste engine oil,diesel,waste vegetable oil, etc, easy operating, safe using and burning perfect.


Our burner is with CE certificate, and quality warranty is one year,


More information, please visit our website: www.skymachinery.com<http://www.skymachinery.com/> for your reference, thank you.


Any inquiries will be appreciated, looking forward to cooperating with you.


Best regards,
Ann Yantai Sky Machinery Co., Ltd.
Add.: R.507 The Great Wall Commercial Building, Yantai, China 264000

www.skymachinery.com rushing in front of your eyes, what do you feel. Regretly, I'm the one everyday send this letter. but I just want to let more people know my products or be my friend. thanks for discussion. I'm Ann, you can add my MSN.

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Re: what do you think about business letter?

09/28/2011 10:44 PM

I think the letter is very poorly written. Bad English, sentence structure and spelling/punctuation make it a sure shot for the waste basket.

Hire an interpreter, in the USA.

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Re: what do you think about business letter?

09/28/2011 11:06 PM

thanks for your reply,I'm to poor to employ an interperter. can you teach me freely?

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Re: what do you think about business letter?

09/28/2011 11:09 PM

hi lyn, can you be my interpreter?

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