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Request Review On My New Electrical Engineering Site

12/16/2015 3:25 AM

My new electrical engineering tutorial blog http://electricalenggtutorial.blogspot.com/

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Re: request review on my new electrical engineering site

12/16/2015 4:05 AM

Welcome to CR4, I don't know how up to date my antivirus program is, so I may not visit your site anytime soon. We generally don't do self promotions on CR4, but there again, there are some that seem to enjoy promoting their knowledge here, right or wrong

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12/16/2015 4:06 AM

I don't think there is enough here just yet to make a sensible evaluation, but here are two hints:

1. In the Blog Archive, the first entries are suitably formatted in first-letter-uppercase, other letters lower-case. Then you switch to all-caps, which you should not do.

2. In the introduction to transformers, you show an elaborate example from the outside, but we can't see inside to the basic idea of primary and secondary windings on a common core.

It may take substantial time to flesh this out into a solid presentation. With perseverance, you may succeed. Best of luck.

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Re: request review on my new electrical engineering site

12/16/2015 4:36 AM

Thank you very much for such a valuable suggestions.

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12/16/2015 5:07 AM

I think you need to look through it with more of a critical eye yourself, or get a friend to before asking strangers to look.

Put yourself in the position of someone who really does not know what Ohm's law is:-

You've used E for voltage in the diagram and V in the text: no problem for anyone having a look from here (CR4), but, really confusing for someone with no idea.

I know this seems like nit picking, but, you need to correct the punctuation and grammar a bit:-

e.g. ..... the two points considered. Put in another way.......

A transformer is a static electrical device......

Don't put a capital after a colon.

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Re: Request Review On My New Electrical Engineering Site

12/16/2015 5:57 AM

Thank you very much

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12/16/2015 8:59 AM

Have you asked some electrical engineering students to critique your tutorial? Do you know a faculty member (or two or three) who'd help you find some testers? You might formulate a couple of questions that could be answered based on the information you present. Sort of like testing documentation to find out if you've covered relevant topics. It's really easy for an expert to leave out steps/information that a newbie needs.

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Re: Request Review On My New Electrical Engineering Site

12/17/2015 2:37 AM

Thank you

YOU GAVE ME A GOOD POINT

ADDING QUESTIONS WILL REALLY HELP

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