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04/22/2010 9:09 AM

It's Poetry Month in the States. Do you know of, or have you written a poem about Science or Engineering you'd like to share with us?

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04/22/2010 9:39 AM

Gimme a minute...I'll come up with something.

My hardware lies languishing on the bench,
the processor slot empty and bereft,
The micro waits it's fill of juicy code,
A purpose, a destiny, chunky crunchy op codes!
The thrill as five volts surges into the circuit,
Hardware and software work as one...ahhhh
Flashing Leds and whirring pumps,
Oh man, I love this job.

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04/22/2010 1:20 PM

There once was a Cat from Harlow,
Who shot his TV with Bow 'N Arrow.
As Mrs Cat looked to see what was about,
The time-travelling squirrel gave a great shout.
To see the damage the projectile had wrought,
But things did not go exactly as thought.
For even though he had worked out the math,
He did not calculate an error to break the bath... beyond,

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04/22/2010 1:36 PM

...yeah, but it was the squirrels fault
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04/22/2010 9:57 AM

Time, he explained, is the prime factor l

Governing human advancement ;l

The heart of measurement is time ;l

Measurement is the blood of science l

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04/22/2010 10:08 AM

Line 2, I meant processor socket

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04/23/2010 1:51 AM

There once was a queer from Khartoum,

Who took a lesbian up to his room.

They argued all night

Over who had the the right

To do what, with which, and to whom.

We'll call this biology, or anthropology, or something, just to pigeonhole it acceptably as science.

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04/23/2010 3:33 AM

Tornado,that a limerick are.

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04/23/2010 3:45 AM

Extremely touching and thought provoking!! I found this beautiful Aussie Summer poem and thought it might be a comfort to you. It was to me and it's very well written; I hope you enjoy it because it's the best piece of English literature I've seen in quite a while.... 'An Aussie Summer ' a poem by Abigail Elizabeth McIntyre.........................................................................................................................Sh1t, It's HOT !

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04/23/2010 10:40 AM

Johnny was a chemist.

Johnny is no more.

What he thought was H-Two-O

Was H-Two-S-O-Four!.

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04/23/2010 10:40 AM

To a Locomotive In Winter

    THEE for my recitative,
    Thee in the driving storm even as now, the snow, the winter-day declining,
    Thee in thy panoply, thy measur'd dual throbbing and thy beat convulsive,
    Thy black cylindric body, golden brass and silvery steel,
    Thy ponderous side-bars, parallel and connecting rods, gyrating, shuttling at thy sides,
    Thy metrical, now swelling pant and roar, now tapering in the distance,
    Thy great protruding headlight fix'd in front,
    Thy long, pale, floating vapor-pennants, tinged with delicate purple,
    The dense and murky clouds out-belching from thy smoke-stack.
    Thy knitted frame, thy springs and valves, the tremulous twinkle of thy wheels,
    Thy train of cars behind, obedient, merrily following,
    Through gale or calm, now swift, now slack, yet steadily careening;
    Type of the modern--emblem of motion and power--pulse of the continent,
    For once come serve the Muse and and merge in verse, even as here I see thee,
    With storm and buffeting gusts of wind and falling snow,
    By day thy warning ringing bell to sound its notes,
    By night thy silent signal lamps to swing.
    Fierce-throated beauty!
    Roll through my chant with all thy lawless music,thy swinging lamps at night,
    Thy madly-whistled laughter, echoing, rumbling like an earthquake, rousing all,
    Law of thyself complete, thine old track firmly holding,
    (No sweetness debonair of tearful harp or glib piano thine,)
    Thy trills and shrieks by rocks and hills return'd,
    Launch'd o'er the praries wide, across the lakes,
    To the free skies unpent and glad and strong.
    Walt Whitman (1876)
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04/23/2010 10:58 AM

The Deacon's Masterpiece

    HAVE you heard of the wonderful one-hoss shay,
    That was built in such a logical way
    It ran a hundred years to a day,
    And then, of a sudden, it--ah, but stay,
    And I'll tell you what happened without delay,
    Scaring the parson into fits,
    Frightening people out of their wits,--
    Have you ever heard of that, I say?
    Seventeen hundred and fifty-five,
    Georgius Secundus was then alive,--
    Snuffy old drone from the German hive.
    That was the year when Lisbon-town
    Saw the earth open and gulp her down,
    And Braddock's army was done so brown,
    Left without a scalp to its crown.
    It was on the terrible Earthquake-day
    That the Deacon finished the one-hoss shay.
    Now in building of chaises, I tell you what,
    There is always somewhere a weaker spot,--
    In hub, tire, felloe, in spring or thill,
    In panel, or crossbar, or floor, or sill, In screw, bolt, thoroughbrace,--lurking still,
    Find it somewhere you must and will,--
    Above or below, or within or without,--
    And that's the reason, beyond a doubt,
    A chaise breaks down, but doesn't wear out.
    But the Deacon swore (as Deacons do),
    With an "I dew vum," or an "I tell yeou,"
    He would build one shay to beat the taown
    'N' the keounty 'n' all the kentry raoun';
    It should be so built that it couldn' break daown:
    --"Fur," said the Deacon, "'t's mighty plain
    Thut the weakes' place mus' stan' the strain;
    'N' the way t' fix it, uz I maintain, Is only jest
    T' make that place uz strong uz the rest."
    So the Deacon inquired of the village folk
    Where he could find the strongest oak,
    That couldn't be split nor bent nor broke,--
    That was for spokes and floor and sills;
    He sent for lancewood to make the thills;
    The crossbars were ash, from the strightest trees,
    The panels of white-wood, that cuts like cheese,
    But lasts like iron for things like these;
    The hubs of logs from the "Settler's ellum,"--
    Last of its timber,--they couldn't sell 'em,
    Never an axe had seen their chips,
    And the wedges flew from between their lips,
    Their blunt ends frizzled like celery tips;
    Step and prop-iron, bolt and screw,
    Spring, tire, axle, and linchpin too,
    Steel of the finest, bright and blue;
    Thoroughbrace bison-skin, thick and wide;
    Boot, top, dasher, from tough old hide
    Found in the pit when the tanner died.
    That was the way he "put her through."--
    "There!" said the Deacon, "naow she'll dew!"
    DO! I tell you, I rather guess
    She was a wonder, and nothing less!
    Colts grew horses, beards turned gray,
    Deacon and Deaconess dropped away,
    Children and grandchildren--where were they?
    But there stood the stout old-one-hoss shay
    As fresh as on Lisbon-earthquake-day!
    EIGHTEEN HUNDRED; -- it came and found
    The Deacon's masterpiece strong and sound.
    Eighteen hundred increased by ten;--
    "Hahnsum kerridge" they called it then.
    Eighteen hundred and twenty came;--
    Running as usual; much the same.
    Thirty and forty at last arrive,
    And then came fifty, and FIFTY-FIVE,
    Little of all we value here
    Wakes on the morn of its hundredth year
    Without both feeling and looking queer.
    In fact, there's nothing that keeps its youth,
    So far as I know, but a tree and truth.
    (This as a moral that runs at large; Take it,--You're welcome.--No extra charge.)
    FIRST OF NOVEMBER--the-Earthquake-day,--
    There are traces of age in the one-hoss-shay,
    A general flavor of mild decay,
    But nothing local, as one may say.
    There couldn't be,--for the Deacon's art
    Had made it so like in every part
    That there wasn't a chance for one to start.
    For the wheels were just as strong as the thills,
    And the floor was just as strong as the sills,
    And the panels just as strong as the floor,
    And the whipple-tree neither less nor more,
    And spring and axle and hub encore,
    And yet, as a whole, it is past a doubt
    In another hour it will be worn out!
    First of November, 'Fifty-five!
    This morning the parson takes a drive.
    Now, small boys, get out of the way!
    Here comes the wonderful one-hoss shay,
    Drawn by a rat-tailed, ewe-necked bay.
    "Huddup!" said the parson. Off went they.
    The parson was working his Sunday text,--
    Had got to fifthly, and stopped perplexed
    At what the--Moses--was coming next.
    All at once the horse stood still,
    Close by the meet'n'-house on the hill.
    --First a shiver, and then a thrill,
    Then something decidedly like a spill,--
    And the parson was sitting up on a rock,
    At half-past nine by the meet'n'-house clock,--
    Just the hour of the Earthquake shock!
    --What do you think the parson found,
    When he got up and stared around?
    The poor old chaise in a heap or mound,
    As if it had been to the mill and ground!
    You see, of course, if you're not a dunce,
    How it went to pieces all at once,--
    All at once, and nothing first,--
    Just as bubbles do when they burst.
    End of the wonderful one-hoss shay,
    Logic is logic. That's all I say.
    Oliver Wendell Holmes
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04/23/2010 11:04 AM

UNDER A TELEPHONE POLE

    I AM a copper wire slung in the air,
    Slim against the sun I make not even a clear line of shadow.
    Night and day I keep singing--humming and thrumming:
    It is love and war and money; it is the fighting and the tears, the work and want,
    Death and laughter of men and women passing through me, carrier of your speech,
    In the rain and the wet dripping, in the dawn and the shine drying,
    A copper wire.
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04/23/2010 11:45 AM

Thanks for the contributions bpO1.

I feel obliged to offer one of my own: Dream Screen

There once was a man,

With wires in his head.

And all that he dreamed,

Came out on a screen,

At the end of his bed.

RSD

P.S. I'm working on one, but ain't quite finished it yet. The Dream Screen is one that has been posted on CR4 before, and it ain't quite happened yet, but people are working on it.

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04/23/2010 11:17 AM

Does science include natural science or only technology?

This one has to do with learning.

Hang Glide

Half-honed skills

Still worthwhile

Flight feathers

Boned like a reptile

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04/23/2010 5:22 PM

The Home

Food, water, fire.

The upside down tent.

The rightside pot.

Daddy makes a path in the Memphis grass.

I follow for love.

No end in sight.

No care.

All daylight and growth.

Awe and wonder, and innocent ignorance.

Loving dogbrained.

I want that b***h.

If I build her a house, rent a room, or

Feed and entertain.

She'll hang around.

Where is my rocket?

The cave is all set up.

I arched the opening.

Now they want to live outside?

Dammit, my back hurts.

Okay, Okay.

Back down to by the ocean. Homes on stilts.

"Hey Honey, I'm off after fish."

"Hey Honey, I'm intent on Plastics!

What? "Whatever."

All wars are over women.

Women like land.

Concrete appeals to them.

The galley is too small.

"Honey we have to move the kitchen outside."

"Why!" "You're a great cook, but you don't know how to quit." all chickens need help.

"The pigs are coming!, the pigs are coming!"

"Awk, Wak, Awk Awk Wak!" "It's a Boy! Now We Have A Name!"

Norman thinks insurance is odd. Norman built a tent outside the cave and Sue wandered into the garden looking for concrete.

The crows arrived and had a sing along with the myna birds singing bugs, bugs, we like to eat barbecued bugs!

Then there was the telephone.

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04/23/2010 5:25 PM

Two poems - Astronomy:

Trammeled Star

Fallen into immanence

Dark heart fused

Being compressed

Fuels the singularly blessed

In the brilliant wilderness

Mars Rising *

Deimos goes

beyond the god,

until Phobos falls into

his bright and heavy head;

heat lightning and thunder,

still no rain yet.

Turning sunspelled

upheld arms,

his central intention

and dry friction,

forceful expansion

tightens into emptiness,

trapping his companion,

stricken down spinning

out of six ways of darkness.

As long as she avoids him

she is as she was frozen;

she and her sister,

broken off substance

harder than the emptiness.

Attraction and pulling

stronger than her own bonds

exploding into powder;

out of cold heaven,

high on the impact,

bursts asunder

heat ensuing

melts water

falling faster

growing rounder

shining streaming

shears the planet

stirs his surface

reds his mud

cools him burning

rises hissing

cloaked and brilliant

unto heaven.

Dust cleared;

a keen wind carrying

a rainbow ring

around the world.

"When the lord is righteous, then the rain will come" (Hawaiian)

* Phobos (fear) Mar's near moon, is due to fall into the planet in some million years or so; thereupon becoming a ring.

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04/23/2010 5:40 PM

Wow!

I'd sure love to hear you read.

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04/23/2010 5:52 PM

Thank you. I have a feeling there are a number of "secret poets" who haven't responded here - the controversial Roger being one. "Fwee Wogew!" (Life of Brian)

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Day Roger does Stand up Comedy, and writes a poem, well, the world might stop spinning.

To do professionally Stand-up, you have to be able to handle hecklers. He, hasn't demonstrated that ability, nor has CL, or most markedly the new administration.

Course if you are a stand-up, you are supposed to bring people in, not drive them out.

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Sorry to transfer a problem to this venue. I just thought I'd mention some common ground and lighten things up a little.

Changing the subject - women DO like land. This one loves it.

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04/23/2010 9:05 PM

An Astrologer's Song

To the Heavens above us
O look and behold
The Planets that love us
All harnessed in gold!
What chariots, what horses
Against us shall bide
While the Stars in their courses
Do fight on our side?

All thought, all desires,
That are under the sun,
Are one with their fires,
As we also are one:
All matter, all spirit,
All fashion, all frame,
Receive and inherit
Their strength from the same.

(Oh, man that deniest
All power save thine own,
Their power in the highest
Is mightily shown.
Not less in the lowest
That power is made clear.
Oh, man, if thou knowest,
What treasure is here!)

Earth quakes in her throes
And we wonder for why!
But the blind planet knows
When her ruler is nigh;
And, attuned since Creation
To perfect accord,
She thrills in her station
And yearns to her Lord.

The waters have risen,
The springs are unbound -
The floods break their prison,
And ravin around.
No rampart withstands 'em,
Their fury will last,
Till the Sign that commands 'em
Sinks low or swings past.

Through abysses unproven
And gulfs beyond thought,
Our portion is woven,
Our burden is brought.
Yet They that prepare it,
Whose Nature we share,
Make us who must bear it
Well able to bear.

Though terrors o'ertake us
We'll not be afraid.
No power can unmake us
Save that which has made.
Nor yet beyond reason
Or hope shall we fall -
All things have their season,
And Mercy crowns all!

Then, doubt not, ye fearful -
The Eternal is King -
Up, heart, and be cheerful,
And lustily sing: -
What chariots, what horses
Against us shall bide
While the Stars in their courses
Do fight on our side?

By Rudyard Kipling

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04/23/2010 11:54 PM

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04/24/2010 6:41 PM

This one isn't quite up to date, but I like it anyway.

Dark Matter

The universe expands we know
As Hubble watches all things go.
The bubble grows but does not burst
From some Big Bang that happened first.

Since everything is leaving us
There is a question to discuss.
Does all we know just go away?
Or is it coming back some day?

The answer is, "It all depends
On how much stuff a Big Bang sends."
For stuff has gravity, some force,
That maybe could reverse the course.

And yes, the stuff is slowing some…
We don't know why, but we're not dumb.
It's just what ever it could be
That slows things down we cannot see.

Invisible we must admit,
And maybe there's enough of it…
Dark matter is, we speculate,
The stuff that may determine fate.

What's dark and yet more prevalent
Than all we see by light that's sent?
I think I know what could be there.
Dark matter must be Black Lab hair.

John H. Bidwell

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04/24/2010 7:24 PM

That's a nice one, anyway.

Maybe the dark-energy push-of-war will win out over the dark-energy tug-of-war....

I am not familiar with the most recent findings/speculations. But I do remember virtual particles and Feynman diagrams. If such particles are scintillating into and out of existence throughout space, what contribution could this make to the dark energy/matter question? I don't know if there is any connection, and I haven't seen if the question has even been posed.

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04/25/2010 11:10 AM

The Old Story

On the face of our ocean world

now float seven major

land masses - the continents -

Antarctica, Australia

Africa, Europe, Asia

North America, South America.

Long ago was

one great continent - Pangaea

alone on the ocean.

It was One World then.

West Virginia was not made

of many hills and valleys

but was an inland sea

and level swampland

with one giant mountain

to the Southeast

where the Carolinas now are.

Slowly rain and wind wore

the great mountain down.

Each time a little skin

washed off and settled

in the low sea of WV

it covered some of

what had passed that year

and held it.

That's how fossils were made,

and footprints sometimes too

as if pressed in a book.

Except that in the heart

of Earth's book

is a ball of hot iron.

Swinging round the Sun

each year as it does,

causes a magnetic field

that makes Earth spin

like an electric motor.

And so days pass

and over a closed surface

like Earth's surface-

it isn't endless-

all matter will come

to meet and part.

So Pangaea parted.

The Ocean rushed in

and continents

bumped and crumpled

and bounced away

around the world.

Lowlands were lifted up,

and wind and rain wore rivers

and hollers and hills

like silverfish boring holes

in Earth book's pages.

At the edges, in fossils

we read some of the story.

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04/25/2010 3:27 PM

That was great Jaen, did you write it?

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04/25/2010 11:16 PM

Thank you, yes. I see I got a GA on it - wonderful - it was written for 4th graders - maybe they got something out of it.

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04/26/2010 3:53 AM

BTW. IF you hold 'shift' down when you hit 'C/R' ('enter' or whatever we call the big fat key on the right these days) you won't get the double line spacing (Of course you may have done it deliberately for presentational purposes...but my monitor isn't that big and I got words all over the floor)
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04/26/2010 12:41 PM

Oh thats a good one GA.

I usually cut and paste to notepad, and paste back again into the editor when I want single line spacing.

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04/26/2010 4:04 PM

I pasted from Microsoft Word - I hate their autoformat and I also stuggled with formatting here. I didn't know how to undo the double-spacing - Thanks.

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04/26/2010 4:45 PM

I have similar problems. I hate that thing that happens when it looks right on my screen, and shows up different in public when I hit submit.

Think we've done alright though for Poetry Month, so far. Leastways I did write a new poem. I probably will die with only one good one per year.

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04/26/2010 5:12 PM

The first poem I posted had half as many lines from the source, but the CR4 editor changed it. I could not change it back. I have posted tables before, and it takes out all the spaces! Some pictures that show up in edit mode end up as a blank square with a red X in the corner. I have complained before to no avail. I wonder if Kris's suggection would have helped me with any of that. Thanks Kris.

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04/27/2010 11:21 AM

Haiku -- poetry for those who can't rhyme and have short attention spans but deep thinking processes.

In all of Nature
Things blend to create a whole.
A machine is part.

Limerick - poetry for those who love to rhyme, have slightly longer attention spans, don't think as deeply, but often obscenely.

There once was a young engineer
Who tackled each task without fear;
Though insightful and bold,
His ideas never sold
As the instructions were never too clear!

Sonnet - a structured poem that rhymes and requires some thought to produce and appreciate. Well, at least it requires some thought to produce. Beauty being in the eye of the beholder, it may require too much effort to appreciate!

If I could just design something that would
Transmit a signal through the air around
The source with some information that could
Be used by some other device that found
Within that signal that which it needed
To perform some wondrous and needed task;
The receptor which my signal heeded
Would work and do and never need to ask
For that piece of data, information
Needed for the pressing task at hand, to
Do what must be done; for repetition
Or a job that's never been done, is new.
I dream not of things we already know;
I dream of a replacement for the radio.

Free verse -- Essentially beautiful prose, often rhythmic, which I can't write.

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04/27/2010 12:14 PM

Amazing!

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